Thesis and topic sentences

Thesis: China and Venezuela have both similarities and differences in the area of family structure, concept of space, holidays.
Topic sentences: 
    Firstly, in the area of family structure, there are cultural differences and similarities between China and Venezuela. The similarities and differences also exist when it comes to the domain of concept of space. Besides, Chinese and Venezuelan culture share it regarding holidays.

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  1. Language TrainerAugust 4, 2017 at 8:15 AM

    Good work but use a different transition that "besides". It's a bit informal. 95

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