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Final Essay-- Thesis and Topic Sentenses

Thesis:   Although some opponents claim that the use of mobile technology should be allowed in the classroom, the mobile devices should be banned because students will distract themselves and others; some students may use them to cheat; and commonly using mobile devices in the classroom is disrespectful to the instructor. Topic Sentenses:  Mobile devices should be banned in the classroom because they draw students' attention away from the class.  Mobile technology should not be allowed during the class because some students may use them to cheat. Because using mobile technology often is disrespectful to the teachers, it should be banned during the class. Some students believe that using mobile devices to take notes will improve their study,  but, unfortunately, they may actually be impairing their learning.         

Synthesis

        Edward         RW613 Synthesis While some persons believe that most of the performance-enhancing drugs should be allowed in competitive sports, others argue that the substances should be banned. Most of PEDs are harmful to human’s body. As Catlin (2012) illustrates, “most of these drugs are not innocuous; they have side effects, many of them serious and irreversible” (para. 4). It shows that many drugs can cause irreversible damage to the athletes. Even under the medical supervision, drugs that pose a major threat to health should be banned. As Mounk points out, “there are good reasons to ban those drugs that pose significant health risks even when taken under medical supervision” (para. 4). This shows that it is not controversial to ban drugs that can cause serious harm to humans. In my opinion, considering the purpose of competitive sports, and from the perspective of people-oriented, people not only should ban dru...

Expatriates in India

Those Europeans and North Americans coming to India to work may find the transportation is terrible; in addition, it is not convenient for them to move because there does not have subway and developed bus system. Besides, the medical security system in India is not as good as in developed countries, and, as a result, the expats in India will be in danger of disease and will be afraid of it. Instead of looking at it in a negative view, experiencing a culture with a lower economic standard than you own is also valuable and precious. Not only can the expatriates learn how their developed countries have developed, but they can also solve the problem in a similar situation in the future. 

Thesis and topic sentences

Thesis: China and Venezuela have both similarities and differences in the area of family structure, concept of space, holidays. Topic sentences:      Firstly, in the area of family structure, there are cultural differences and similarities between China and Venezuela. The similarities and differences also exist when it comes to the domain of concept of space. Besides, Chinese and Venezuelan culture share it regarding holidays.