Summary: Mr. Mom by Tony Hicks
Summary: Mr. Mom by Tony
Hicks
Mr. Mom by Tony Hicks is a
short article about that fathers stay at home to take care of children. The
phenomenon is more common in rich area. Even though the change for most parents
is not easy, it is actually a better way in contrast to women staying at home
because through this way the dads can bond well with their children and it is
also a positive experience for them. However, it is difficult for men to copy
with the housework and may not acceptable by people around them.
Good work joining sentences and clauses but don't make them too long. This should be 2 sentences: "Even though the change for most parents is not easy, it is actually a better way in contrast to women staying at home because through this way the dads can bond well with their children and it is also a positive experience for them."
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